Distrust
I am always suspicious
Of things tender and delicious
There is poison in what i find precious
Things can never go right for me
In my past this is all i see
Failure, betrayal, alone will I be
I say I trust, when full of lust
Yet my heart feels like dust
Dried out by the unjust
Pumping bile and disgust
Causing my soul to combust
As my passions begin to rust
There is nothing more but despair
Fleeting failing, forsaken care
An endless, hollow, trance like stare
As I wonder through this life of terror
Love becomes the riskiest, most disturbing dare
For nothing it has to offer is ever fair
Death, is all i have to wait for
Its the only thing left I adore
My heart is broken unlike before
Before when heat was in my core
Back when love was new and un-tore
When I didn’t know what was in store
Before my heart lost its will, the war
Nothing is left but a shell of what was
No performance left for you to applause
Broken down by fates horrendous laws
My trust, heart, soul, are stuck in pause
I now can only remember what was the cause
Unable to return to the past,
Undo this cursed spell that was cast
Lost in my unsurpassed contrast
Of chaos that has a territory so vast
That I could never hope to overcome or last
So, I stand ready for loves ending blast
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April 19th, 2010 at 6:23 AM
You’re not the only one! Let me tell you straight! Lovely rhyme here, again. All you can do in the end is pray it’s quick lol never get married!
April 20th, 2010 at 11:45 AM
“I am always suspicious / Of things tender and delicious” that’s a good opening. It’s better than good. You got rhyme, you got rhythm, you got talent. Personal is welcome, but business is preferred? You got wisdom. You can’t lose.
April 21st, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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April 21st, 2010 at 7:51 PM
everyone feels that way at time,
but trust and encouragement win the same,
nicely said about your mindset and
stay cool,
you have gifts in poetry,
which is a blessing to our Poets’ Rally!
April 21st, 2010 at 8:39 PM
thats got a wicked flow to it…would love to hear it read…been there myself as well…
April 21st, 2010 at 11:49 PM
great rhyming and use of words! 😀 i like it 🙂
April 22nd, 2010 at 2:48 AM
This rolls beautifully.
April 22nd, 2010 at 2:53 AM
Just hang in there…
Been there, take your time.
Happy Thursday!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira
April 22nd, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Very powerful poem, and I agree past the dark you will receive light. Darkness deserves as much value as love, and I thank you for sharing this so openly. 🙂
It is wonderful to express how one feels, within the moment as than you begin to acknowledge exactly how you feel and this is the most natural thing in the world.
Wonderful expression.
April 22nd, 2010 at 11:06 AM
some very profound thoughts and images here – the depth of human emotion is well portrayed here. Good Work!
April 22nd, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Thank you all for your wonderful comments 😀 but don’t forget to look around :P.
April 22nd, 2010 at 1:00 PM
a very sad and beautiful poem.
April 22nd, 2010 at 3:43 PM
A very beautiful poem indeed
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May 6th, 2010 at 9:36 PM
Good poem! Sad, but good!