Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill wanted a thrill
Talking it over the made the choice
So Jill went to buy the pill
As Jack took a drink to steady his voice

Jill returned home and they went up the hill
Jack laid down a blanket for their fun
AS they made a forever promising deal
Under the failing light of the sun

Jack and Jill preceded into intercourse
With out Jack wearing protection
There love was not this fun’s source
As he left her with his injection

Jill had all faith in her pill
Jack and Jill were expecting top rate
As they returned home to chill
A week passed and Jill was to be late

Arguing and fighting between the two began
Blaming one another for the problem  at hand
Jill yelled at jack for never being a man
As he told her abortion was his stand

They had no money for a third party
also a child in a house of anger
Is no place to raise a child smarty
Jack began to drink and hit her

As they fought over what to do next
Jill poured Jacks booze down the drain
So Jack took her body with a strong annex
Forcing their failing relationship to strain

Jill laid battered and naked on the floor crying
As Jack walked towards to closet grabbing something metal
Screaming down at her that one way or another that baby is dying
Swing the bat down hitting her stomach and a heated kettle

Jill chocking on air couldn’t let out a sound
As Jack took a few more swings before dropping the bat
Jack walked away as Jill grabbed the kettle on the ground
Standing with sudden energy she bashed the head of that rat

Then poured boiling hot water on his head
Out of rage she went to the kitchen to grab a blade
Stabbing him many times till he was dead
After the deed was done her strength too did fade

My version of “Jack and Jill” Comes from the traditional version of the “Jack and Jill went Up the hill” Nursery Rhyme, no copyright infringements implied, Original ideas and content date back to the 18th century, to view the original works please go to http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nursery_rhymes


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