I Thought That We Were Over
When we were together you wanted more
Now apart you wish I was like before
I am sorry did I say you had a choice
That I wanted to hear your selfish voice
You never had a right to tell me how to be
Back before, when I let you own and control me
When I was nothing more than your mat
Now please, wont you shut your trap
The days of me bending over backwards for you have passed
Is that really so fucking hard to grasp
You say you want to be friends
Yet you keep tugging at my loosened mends
You are just a liar and a fake
There is no way to mistake
The fact you are just a slithering snake
That believes that it can shit cake.
I really don’t think we should work this out
I don’t care what your all about
My love and concern for you had died
Now all I remember is how much you lied
I wont be your friend so you’ll feel better
It’s your fault that I became this bitter
Walk away and never come back
I hate you now and that’s a fact
One can’t help but to get the feeling that you mean this. “The fact you are just a slithering snake, That believes that it can shit cake.” This is quite a line that really points to the egoic nature of this person. Very strong. I would like to invite you to 1markt.wordpress.com and check out the piece titled “It’s More Than You” and if your time allows that you will stay for awhile and check out more. Please let me know of any thoughts by commenting,
Sincerely,
Marcus T.
ah , strong feelings , grudges, hate and break up; well expressed.a sense of anger is clear between the lines.
you sure know how to fabulously portray feelings-loved the way you portrayed the fury of a wronged person. hats off!
hi I’m back to offer you an award , get it in my blog.you deserve it for your support.
nice poem!
you played the words beautifully!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/20/the-perfect-poet-award-for-week-10-poets-rally/
week 10 perfect poet award,
please read rule of acceptance before doing anything,
basically,
display the logo,
nominate one poet from previous Rally members,
post a poem along…
Good luck!
Good poem and I guess it’s over now,been there,did that!!! Really good!!