Thursdays Poetry Rally Week 9

Posted: March 11, 2010 by shoelessboywonder in Uncategorized
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Thursdays Poetry  Rally Week 9

A distant chime rings out in each direction
Then every thing becomes still and quite quiet
Then a growing rumbling from every section
Birds take flight to avoid the coming riot

A clearing will soon become a battle field
The Poets and writers begin to emerge
With pins in hand and their poems as a shield
They charge to the center and start to merge

They write comments down on one another’s work
Nominating another for the epic award
A poem so good they make readers go berserk
At the end of the day only one is adored

I nominate Kseverny this week good luck fellow poets :D

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Comments
  1. ishabelle says:

    what a fitting poem for every thursday’s event!!!! ludos… :)

  2. souldose says:

    Wow this is a nice sort of tribute to this fun event, beautiful

  3. suzicate says:

    You captured the essence of it! Funny when I went to post my poem this morn and saw your message and followed by to instantly see the word “chime” which is throughout my poem!

  4. fiveloaf says:

    haha- wonderful phrase and hey severny! you are epitomised here – come come haha!

  5. doubtfulpoet says:

    Cool! Fresh take on it lol! I’ll link you in no worries tonight :) Nice to meet you *waves*

  6. Go Poets Good luck to you all :P ..

  7. Ji says:

    Hello,
    your poem is cool,
    i can see poets charging and Rally is a hot event in your words.
    thank you for the wit and energy!
    Happy Thursday!

  8. BFG says:

    quite fun, thanks!

  9. moondustwriter says:

    Really like your style – glad we finally met in the poetry world!!!

  10. samanthayeh says:

    how thoughtful and intriguing! your metaphor ~

    your poem is very fitting for this week, and i hardly expected the twist : )

  11. I.S. says:

    love this your use of metaphor!

    ~IS

  12. nanno1982 says:

    That was quite fun and great read..
    You’re a very talented poet. And I love it when you dedicate your efforts to fellow poets..
    Good Job

    • Well that is what the rally is about in my mind, celebrating other poets talents along with your own. True readers of my work would read some of my other works and comment as well but all kind words are appreciated . :)

      • nanno1982 says:

        You have hit a true point. Usually readers will just visit the link on the Thursday Rally i.e. your posted poem for the week. I have lots of other work too that nobody is interested in. But I’d love to take a look on your other work as well. Don’t stop writing no matter the quantity of the feedback you’re getting!

  13. [...] humbled. Thank you so much, FIVELOAF! Here, I would like to nominate FIVELOAF for backyard and SHOELESSBOYWONDER for THURSDAYS POETRY RALLY WEEK 10 for next week’s Perfect Poet Award, I leave it to [...]

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